Treaty of Waitangi
A great deal
Between Maori and British
Signed in the year 1840
At a place called Waitangi
The treaty danced
But only the British enjoyed
The Maori did not understand
Because the versions
Were not hand in hand
By Wuatai
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Kia Ora Wuatai, this poem is very cool. I can see that you've described a lot about the treaty of waitangi. My question for you is,"Who were the first people to sign the treaty?" Other than that have great day and keep up with the good work :))
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Malo Wuatai I like how you rhymed it out thats cool. My Question for you is who signed the treaty and should of made like four more lines but its ok. keep up the great work.:)
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Hello Wuatai. What a great Poem you have done I really enjoyed it. Do you enjoy Writing Poems. Keep up the great work Wuatai.
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hi wuatai,
ReplyDeletewow i am surprised you have improved.
Hi wuatai
ReplyDeleteI really like your poem keep up the great work and keep blogging
Hi wuatai
ReplyDeleteI like the poem u did it is really good keep it up
Hi Wuatai, I enjoyed reading your poem about The Treaty.👍
ReplyDeleteHey Wuatai I Really Enjoy Reading your poem about the treaty
ReplyDeletekeep up the great work Wuatai
Thank you for sharing your experiences with me, I'm a Norwegian/Australian. Wuatai's poem reminds us Aussies that we still haven't got a Treaty with our Indigenous people, who own the land we live on. May-Brit Akerholt
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