Wednesday, 29 July 2015

Siosifa's work on another cause of child injury and fatality


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  1. Good wake up call for us. This is why it is so important to learn how to swim and be safe around the water especially in summer time. Far too may preventable deaths in the sea.

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    1. Drowning is a very serious thing, because we've all been to the beach or had a bath in our lifetime. Beaches are really dangerous because there are a thing could rip tide, and those could drag you into the ocean.

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    2. hi Mrs tofa my name is Atlanta i like the way you were discribing heeps of words like lacke pool beach pond river it is very creative
      From Atlanta.

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  2. Good job!
    By just reading your work I can already tell that you are very smart and careful when you are around water.
    From Tamaki Primary School

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    1. hi Ajani my name is jahney and i lke the way you talking about water saffdy because it is good for aouther peoples saffdy

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  3. Hello Siosifa, I am Krishna. Have you ever seen anyone drown in the water. Have you felt nervous of going into the water??

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    1. you have to give more inflammation Fine sorry

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  11. ni hao My name is Mason what I like about your post is that it's about water and it hurts you and injury child. What I think of this blog post is Kinder sad. And cool. I love your blog post. Siosifa

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  12. Hello, my name is David and I am from Tamaki Primary School. I am a year 8 student. I really love work on your blog post and keep up with all the good work.

    Thank you!

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  13. Kia Ora siasifi, my name is Rawiri. I really like how you are telling people that their are other nicknames for water, also telling people that water is not safe. Two things you got to work on is full stops and punctuations, keep up the great work!

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    1. kia ora siasifi my name is tarlia i like the way you were talking about water saffty because
      it helps people keep safe.

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    2. kia ora siasifi my name is tarlia i like the way you were talking about water saffty because
      it helps people keep safe.

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    3. kia ora siasifi my name is tarlia i like the way you were talking about water saffty because
      it helps people keep safe.

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  16. hi i like how you help the kidz

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